Friday, March 30, 2007
i posted on brians page....
great first draft i liked the angle along and it seems to have the same feel as my paper. and with that you have the same problem i have going on and on about things that come to your head. you should always relate you ideas back to your thesis to make your paper stronger
i posted on elliots page...
webster,
this is a great first draft, you have great ideas talking about both movies and giving the summary. now think about taking the next step getting less vague and look at the evidence. also find you self a thesis something that you relate all your ideas back to one thing. one thesis can be something along the lines of they way your eyes opened after learning about all this stuff, or maybe how you emotionaly felt after learning all these new things.
this is a great first draft, you have great ideas talking about both movies and giving the summary. now think about taking the next step getting less vague and look at the evidence. also find you self a thesis something that you relate all your ideas back to one thing. one thesis can be something along the lines of they way your eyes opened after learning about all this stuff, or maybe how you emotionaly felt after learning all these new things.
Monday, March 26, 2007
light brain storm
Industrial food system is one great big well oiled machine.
The IFS is the capitalist way of making affordable food for everyone and gain a huge profit.
People have no real knowledge of the real IFS some think they know about it and others have no idea the impact that IFS has on everyone’s daily life.
The IFS is the capitalist way of making affordable food for everyone and gain a huge profit.
People have no real knowledge of the real IFS some think they know about it and others have no idea the impact that IFS has on everyone’s daily life.
Sunday, March 4, 2007
very first draft
To be an athlete you need to be on top of your game mentally and physically. The definition of athlete is a person trained of gifted in exercise or physical contest involving agility and stamina. An athlete’s diet is the smartest and best dietary choice for any person. To be an athlete you need to be healthy there are no athletes who smoke cigarettes, eat fast-food every day and does not do exercise. Being able to eat right is very simple and accessible to everyone. You can jog for free anytime of the day, you can walk to work and home everyday and its free exercise. This diet isn’t the right way you have to eat it’s a guide to a healthier way to eat. If anything it is a bridge from being an unhealthy person to becoming an extremely healthy person.
Being an athlete is the easiest way to stay in shape and stay healthy. You can eat pretty much all you want but nothing to an excess. You can eat all the good food that you love to eat and then burn it off working out, running and exercising. Also during your athletes diet you have to balance your diet you can’t always eat fried chicken and run two miles. That wouldn’t work up, you need a balanced diet.
Athletes can be athletes any where any time. You can walk to work and exercise. Take the stars instead of the elevator/escalator. Drink water instead of soda. Have a balanced diet that reflects the way you workout; of you body build you need more protein in your diet and the same when you sweat a lot you need more electrolytes.
Being an athlete is the easiest way to stay in shape and stay healthy. You can eat pretty much all you want but nothing to an excess. You can eat all the good food that you love to eat and then burn it off working out, running and exercising. Also during your athletes diet you have to balance your diet you can’t always eat fried chicken and run two miles. That wouldn’t work up, you need a balanced diet.
Athletes can be athletes any where any time. You can walk to work and exercise. Take the stars instead of the elevator/escalator. Drink water instead of soda. Have a balanced diet that reflects the way you workout; of you body build you need more protein in your diet and the same when you sweat a lot you need more electrolytes.
Monday, February 12, 2007
Revised Chicken Team
I have looked online to try to buy chickens but you can not buy them online I do not believe you can buy chickens. I think you need to have some connections to buy them I am really not too sure.
It seems to be the best chicken we can get for the class is the “Leghorn” it is a so called “egg machine” it lays eggs in the winter and it is very tolerant to confinement. It doesn’t fly and it they are not loud.
http://www.ithaca.edu/staff/jhenderson/chooks/dual.html
FASTFOOD: Bravo
I had lunch at bravo pizzeria. I was freezing outside so everyone crowded indoors. Bravos I very small and the place you have to order at it right near the door so the door keeps opening letting in cold air all this cacaos just to order some pizza. Once we got to order our pizza they said they did not have any plain slices they have only what you can see. So I picked my second favorite plain Sicilian, I no big surprise. Waited till it was warm paid go my cup and walked to the soda machine after arguing for where we should sit we walked up the stairs to the second floor. Once we were up there we ate a talked about our day and how fucking cold is it outside. Everyone said that they hated the food. I personally didn’t mind it I was so hungry. I went threw my slices like they where water. Believe you me they didn’t taste good but I wasn’t hungry after that meal that is for sure.
It seems to be the best chicken we can get for the class is the “Leghorn” it is a so called “egg machine” it lays eggs in the winter and it is very tolerant to confinement. It doesn’t fly and it they are not loud.
http://www.ithaca.edu/staff/jhenderson/chooks/dual.html
FASTFOOD: Bravo
I had lunch at bravo pizzeria. I was freezing outside so everyone crowded indoors. Bravos I very small and the place you have to order at it right near the door so the door keeps opening letting in cold air all this cacaos just to order some pizza. Once we got to order our pizza they said they did not have any plain slices they have only what you can see. So I picked my second favorite plain Sicilian, I no big surprise. Waited till it was warm paid go my cup and walked to the soda machine after arguing for where we should sit we walked up the stairs to the second floor. Once we were up there we ate a talked about our day and how fucking cold is it outside. Everyone said that they hated the food. I personally didn’t mind it I was so hungry. I went threw my slices like they where water. Believe you me they didn’t taste good but I wasn’t hungry after that meal that is for sure.
Friday, February 9, 2007
Questions From Class
Which foods seem healthiest to you? If you had infinity time and infinity skill and infinity money what would be your three meals for three days?
DAY 1
Breakfast
I would eat a large stack of French toast with some bacon but not that much, made very crunchy. A huge orange juice and some water.
Lunch
I would have a sandwich turkey; thinnest cut slices so thin that you can see through the piece of turkey. Then I would add salami and pepperoni cut the same way. Then I would add the best American chesses money could buy. I would cut up the biggest best juiciest tomatoes and great lettuce. Add some spicy mustard oil and vinegar salt and pepper all on top of a foot long Italian hero. I would have a good homemade bag of barbecue chips. With a Sunkist in a frozen ice glass.
Dinner
for dinner i would have a homemade burger from my mother. i think she makes the best burgers ever. i would have that and a side of fries from "pome fris". "pome Fris" is a Belgian fries place on st. marks have the best fries in the city i love them. and then a tall glass of, again Sunkist.
In general what should people eat?
I believe that people should be able to eat what ever they want to eat. but if you want to be healthy its an obvious choice not to eat fast food and food that has be proven not to be healthy.
The team i would want to take part in is the chicken team. i find that the chicken team is going to be the center of all the teams and i think my leadership and my character will fit perfectly with the group. i have read the chicken coop book and i think they have a lot of good ideas but i think we can use those ideas and then add or subtract somethings to make it fit with what we are trying to aim to get.
DAY 1
Breakfast
I would eat a large stack of French toast with some bacon but not that much, made very crunchy. A huge orange juice and some water.
Lunch
I would have a sandwich turkey; thinnest cut slices so thin that you can see through the piece of turkey. Then I would add salami and pepperoni cut the same way. Then I would add the best American chesses money could buy. I would cut up the biggest best juiciest tomatoes and great lettuce. Add some spicy mustard oil and vinegar salt and pepper all on top of a foot long Italian hero. I would have a good homemade bag of barbecue chips. With a Sunkist in a frozen ice glass.
Dinner
for dinner i would have a homemade burger from my mother. i think she makes the best burgers ever. i would have that and a side of fries from "pome fris". "pome Fris" is a Belgian fries place on st. marks have the best fries in the city i love them. and then a tall glass of, again Sunkist.
In general what should people eat?
I believe that people should be able to eat what ever they want to eat. but if you want to be healthy its an obvious choice not to eat fast food and food that has be proven not to be healthy.
The team i would want to take part in is the chicken team. i find that the chicken team is going to be the center of all the teams and i think my leadership and my character will fit perfectly with the group. i have read the chicken coop book and i think they have a lot of good ideas but i think we can use those ideas and then add or subtract somethings to make it fit with what we are trying to aim to get.
Thursday, February 8, 2007
Farmers Market Trip
Raspberry, blue berry, and strawberry jams.
Jams are good to eat because they are natural and jams from farmers markets are made by a small farm and not mass produced so its better quality than say a “Smuckers” brand of jam.
At the farmers market me and the fellas were looking around. We found this nice little jam table filled with jams from grape to raspberry, they even had some honey. The name of the little company is Berkshire Berries. The owners David and Mary graves are from Becket, Massachusetts. They get there honey from hives all around the city on roof top gardens.
You grow the berries on a farm or a huge plantation. Then you have to pick them and clean them. After cleaning the berries put them in a bucket and start to mash them up after mashing up the berries you add ¼ of water for every to cups of berries. Then add in your secret concoctions or anything else to spice up your jam.
www.berkshireberries.com
P.S. shawn, joey, mark and I went to the rail jam this night and it was pretty cool. it was the big scaffolding that was being bulit.
Jams are good to eat because they are natural and jams from farmers markets are made by a small farm and not mass produced so its better quality than say a “Smuckers” brand of jam.
At the farmers market me and the fellas were looking around. We found this nice little jam table filled with jams from grape to raspberry, they even had some honey. The name of the little company is Berkshire Berries. The owners David and Mary graves are from Becket, Massachusetts. They get there honey from hives all around the city on roof top gardens.
You grow the berries on a farm or a huge plantation. Then you have to pick them and clean them. After cleaning the berries put them in a bucket and start to mash them up after mashing up the berries you add ¼ of water for every to cups of berries. Then add in your secret concoctions or anything else to spice up your jam.
www.berkshireberries.com
P.S. shawn, joey, mark and I went to the rail jam this night and it was pretty cool. it was the big scaffolding that was being bulit.
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