Friday, March 30, 2007

i posted on brians page....

great first draft i liked the angle along and it seems to have the same feel as my paper. and with that you have the same problem i have going on and on about things that come to your head. you should always relate you ideas back to your thesis to make your paper stronger

1 comment:

Juggleandhope said...

Stanley,

Good feedback here to Brian and Elliot.